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Reviewer Date Chapter Type
Stardust Firebolt 2002-11-08 1 Anonymous
It rhymes. IT RHYMES. Damn it, I am jealous. I can't make things rhyme for nuts.

Anyway, as usual, now I am going to morph into the corny reviewer: This was really short and sweet. ^_^ (seems to be your style for most of your stories, eh?)

For some absurd reason I went back to read your reviews for "Open Your Eyes" and I saw ArTeMis fOwl's rather nasty review. The least he (I'm assuming it's a he since he used Artemis' name from the book, unless it's really a girl impersonating the genius - of which I highly doubt but then again my assumption could be wrong) could do was to actually write a constructive review. I really hate it when I find people in the Artemis Fowl section like that; it's truly a disgrace. If he didn't like the story he should have left it alone. And all your other fics for that matter. And now I'm probably sounding very petty so I'll receive a flame or two if I get lucky. :)

I guess the WHOLE LONG POINT of the above paragraph was to state my displeasure at immaturity still running rampant in the world today. (There I go with my dumb philosophies again...and no, it's not a personal flame towards ArTeMis fOwL.) Sorry for the irksome review but my feathers are very ruffled and I need to vent the inner anger within.

Blue Yeti 2002-10-04 1 Signed
I keep finding these stories and things which I read ages ago and didn't review. shame, shame ::give myself a slap:: I like the picking up of a random idea and creating meaning around it because not enough people are picking up the arty-fartyness at AF. Again the lack of puntuation annoyed me but that's just part of your style and i'll stop bugging you about it. Very sweet ot have something from the coin because it was quite a turning point in the book but not enough MS writers realise this because they could realy use it.

Whops...I though that slimefrog had the honesty plea.

~Blue yeti

Flamewing 2002-08-17 1 Signed
Umm...hmm...
An honest review...
The last verse makes it seem like Holly thinks about him as more than a stupid teenager who nearly got her killed but eventually saved her life. Which, in my view, is scary--Holly thinking of him like that. But that's just me.
Well, it was a great poem. I liked the rhyming scheme.

~Flamewing
PS--Thanks for reviewing my fic.

dog-boy 2002-08-11 1 Signed
#Giggles# I loved it!
SerenaArythusa 2002-07-29 1 Signed
Wow... I had, like, completely forgotten the coin. I can't stand the fairies BWAHAHA but it's still soooo sweet! XD
Red Moon Kree 2002-07-16 1 Signed
AWESOME! this is soooooo sweet!
Dark Anubis 2002-07-15 1 Signed
Wow!That was a very good poem.I liked it a lot.
Artemis Fowl the Second 2002-07-14 1 Signed
Oh my god!!Great poem!!U R definitely a gifted writer.Keep on writing.
the cursed one 2002-07-13 1 Anonymous
hey, great poem girl! i'm really not sure if i'm 4 or against h/a cos 2 me it just seems incredibly WRONG but hey, i still read it! plz continue, wot u've done so far is great^_~
LCM 2002-07-12 1 Anonymous
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!!! LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ IT BE ALMOST LIKE A H/A!!!!!! MWHAHAH!!!! COOLNESS!!! WRITE A FIC!!!! ON IT!!! MWHAHHA!! SO COOL!! LOVE! ^_^
CyberGhostface 2002-07-12 1 Signed
This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work!